Perhaps you should have paid more attention in your English classes and you might have actually learned how to write a short story. The story was a little short, probably a good thing. Xxx HD mom Do us all a favor and don’t even bother to post any more of this insipid drivel..«12» I want to read more.Anonymous readerReport 2009-02-28 06:01:12Spelling and punctuation leave a lot to be desired. Do us all a favor and don’t even bother to post any more of this insipid drivel..«12» 7 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2009-03-07 04:34:54ok i guess!Anonymous readerReport 2009-03-02 06:37:36this story rocks!!!ZapgazeReport 2009-03-01 16:20:05The World Ends With You… Do us all a favor and don’t even bother to post any more of this insipid drivel..«12»
