3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-04-07 14:21:41Poor writing. Mom xxx You made several wrong choices in word selection (i.e. So how a pet should be treated and how my MASTER is with me. You made several wrong choices in word selection (i.e. Most of the time you guessed wrong. So how a pet should be treated and how my MASTER is with me. Most of the time you guessed wrong. Most of these errors could be corrected by proof-reading by a literate person BEFORE submitting your work. 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-04-07 14:21:41Poor writing. ‘Its tits WHERE tightly…and THE tied…’, ‘…before the house went QUITE.’,
‘It felt hands on IT body…’, ‘Dinner is SERVICED…’, ‘…before BRING it to…’, etc, etc. You apparently don’t know when to use ‘its’ (possessive) and when to use ‘it’s’ (contraction of ‘it is’. You apparently
