5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-05-25 10:35:10A Great story Thanks for posting.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-21 12:07:00Where to start ?? 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-05-25 10:35:10A Great story Thanks for posting.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-21 12:07:00Where to start ?? Mom xxx video 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-05-25 10:35:10A Great story Thanks for posting.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-21 12:07:00Where to start ?? (countrycadillac)blonde_kidReport 2013-05-21 11:51:51Thanks for the feedback. It’s my first story so gettinng used to the writing portion. Pronouns should start with a capital(Grace). Your doing fine, don’t give up. Your doing fine, don’t give up. You have the idea in the back of your head you just don’t know how to tell your fingers to type it in. Just a little harder to do proof reads when you’re on a kindle touch.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-21 11:46:07It really needs a rewrite.
