6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2014-09-18 23:59:16Cool story stop being a bunch of dick…have fun relax good job authoranonymous readerReport 2013-12-01 01:37:54Did you skip your punctuation classes entirely? Hot mom xxx but I couldn’t understand why there was an ‘
But reading farther I realized Kendra was the sister.. It should be “Kendra, my wife Beckah’s sister,…” if anything. This is AWFULLY poor writing. but I couldn’t understand why there was an ‘
But reading farther I realized Kendra was the sister.. At first I thought Kendra was your wife and Beckah was your wife’s sister.. Better still, just don’t post it at all.anonymous readerReport 2013-12-01 01:30:09Bad story, don’t want to see part two until you learn how to properly differentiate between characters, describe a scene, and use punctuation.anonymous readerReport 2013-11-30 14:33:52″ Kendra, my wife, Beckah’s sister” this was very confusing.
