Try to be a little more vivid when you write. Who enjoys watching grainy quality pornos ? Xxx HD mom This story did nothing for me. Kudos for that I suppose.READERReport 2004-07-16 23:32:53The mother-fucking author did not even edit this piece of shit before posting it. Kudos for that I suppose.READERReport 2004-07-16 23:32:53The mother-fucking author did not even edit this piece of shit before posting it. People who don’t edit their stories before posting them are assuming that their audience are as moronic and sloppy as what they are. Who browses girly magazines where half the pictures are out of focus ? A story is supposed to create a picture, until you barely realize you’re reading anymore and you feel like you’re there, watching what’s going on.
