14 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2013-05-09 22:04:14Hay comes in ‘bales’ not ‘bails’. Mom xxx video Learn to use quotation marks to indicate what someone is saying. You sometimes use them but more often than not, you neglect to use them It would make your writing a whole lot better if you did this. Try proof-reading BEFORE you submit and maybe you can correct many of your numerous errors. Learn to use quotation marks to indicate what someone is saying. Try proof-reading BEFORE you submit and maybe you can correct many of your numerous errors. Use ‘you’re right’ (which is a contraction of ‘you are right’) instead of ‘your right’. Mabe you can write some tails regarding your wife.Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-12 21:10:12i love this whole saga, have to say the best thing ive ever read in my entire life, it
