Awesome.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-08 16:51:34Bad writing all around. Story was amazing but the girls age was far too young : («123» Awesome.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-08 16:51:34Bad writing all around. Mom xxx 15 comments«123»SilverSwanReport 2020-01-29 02:20:47Absolutely badAnonymous readerReport 2015-10-11 15:39:51good story but I must say your writing style is a bit stiff try to let it flow more she does not need to say his name every time he ask her to do something is just one example of what I mean. again very good story thank youanonymous readerReport 2013-09-13 11:20:43ZOdQT9 Hey, thanks for the post.Thanks Again. 15 comments«123»SilverSwanReport 2020-01-29 02:20:47Absolutely badAnonymous readerReport 2015-10-11 15:39:51good story but I must say your writing style is a bit stiff try to let it flow more she does not need to say his name every time he ask her to do something is just one example of
