Its long, and nice…but just poorly given to us. Who cares if you have friends in the highway patrol and they clock your car? Mom xxx video Its long, and nice…but just poorly given to us. punctuation, dreadful.” Work on that and spelling and maybe I can get through your story without getting annoyed.Anonymous readerReport 2009-03-11 03:40:31grammer, horrible. So really take to heart what a previous poster said “grammar, horrible. So yeah lose all the mini stories unless your trying to lead into having a threesome or something it’s really pointless. I think your writing style sucks. I’m all for extra information, but not when that information has no relevance what so ever to the story. Its long, and nice…but just poorly given to us.
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