All the same, after fighting through this grammatical jungle, I still enjoyed it. All the same, after fighting through this grammatical jungle, I still enjoyed it. Mom xxx 9/10READERReport 2006-03-24 06:04:23This was a wonderful story, but it could have been twice as good if the “author” only learned a little about proper punctuation, spelling, use of proper grammar, etc. That’s pretty good grammar for what’s here. That’s pretty good grammar for what’s here. lolREADERReport 2006-03-25 21:31:22listen dumbass, a vw beetle is air cooled, no radiator, stick with your day job.4/10READERReport 2006-03-25 18:02:42maybe Reader
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should post a story himself and shut the fuck upREADERReport 2006-03-24 22:23:18What are you talking about. I give it an 8/10«12» Great story.
